On Her Mind

So this was a caption that I'd written awhile back, but I wasn't that happy with it, so I'd forgone publishing it for awhile. Today, I went back and cut some text, changed some things, and over all, I am much more pleased with how it turned out this go around. I've posted the original as well, so if you'd like to see how it originally was, take a look, and let me know what you think of the changes!

Home Early

When I saw this picture, the look on the blonde's face just totally screamed total surprise at me and this idea just popped into my head. It's my first go at making a comic style caption and surprisingly, it's quite short! I didn't feel any further dialogue was needed, the picture seemed to speak for itself. Leave me some comments and let me know what you guys think! Do you like the comic style? Should I try using this style more often?

A Rose By Any Other Name...

Consequences of Cheating

Any suggestions for the name of such a "company/academy"?